Really enjoyed this. Kind of hits home, you know? Great work, as always.

The ending seems a bit rushed, but it's still a very moving, dramatic story. I love that last sentence : "I kick a woodchip and cry." Maybe I'm just weird like that, though.

Amazing. So powerful. Brilliant brilliant stuff. Can realte. F*cki*g powerful. Brilliant brilliant, Words cannot begin on this one. *standing ovation* sos

Darn your a good writer! This is so beautiful and sad and I understand it all too well - *sigh*

You know, your vingette's are more powerful emotionally than your longer stories. why i don't know. but its good. oh yes, so good.

NOT ENOUGH?

NOT. ENOUGH?

agh so saaad... damn.

i liked it. ) i really did... well, i'd read anything from you, crazywriter...

and yes, i'm not yet through with cal and leit. ::evil grin:: although, i think i won't be able to get those marsbars... :(