hmm...interesting. sounds like one of my friends. please continue

Extremely poignant...had a situation like that growing up, so i know the feeling somewhat. The constant fighting...your verse is very well done, and i enjoyed reading it.

I like the story i hope u add more

Dang. Depressing. Good story.

I can totally relate to this.. ^^ Great stuff

short but good...i would like to see more..