 phoenixa-mechanique 2003-03-12 . chapter 1I honestly enjoyed it very much! I'm usually cynical when it comes to non-structured poems but yours was amazing. I love the in depth and almost complete coverage of the "god-forsaken" topic! Lovely!
-Phoenixa. |
 Amanda (again) 2002-08-09 . chapter 1 I just read this again-last time I kinda just scanned it-man, Thuie, this is amazing-you just take all the feelings of everyone's unrequited love and sum them up in a few words...you amaze me, dude...hehe...wheee.... |
 AmandaPanda 2002-08-03 . chapter 1hi thuie!! me back from the faraway land of carlisle...wheeee....
c'est un...poem...tres bon!! very emotion-filled (if that is a word)...anyway, it's very good! |
 butterfly6 2002-07-22 . chapter 1thu.....what can i say....i am always tellign you what an incredible write you are, but you never believe me...isnt this proof? its jsut...wow! its incredible....its amazing...its poetry...its emotions...its everything i feel...everything you feel...everything everyoen feels! it says exactly tthe right thing in exactly the right way! you i know i love you....but even if i ahted you i woudl think this peom was incredible. write more int hat little black book! dani |
 Charlene 2002-07-21 . chapter 1 um... it was confusing about what it was REALLY about, but otherwise, this was a very good poem:)
very sad :( moving, touching |
 Toilet Paper Boy 2002-07-21 . chapter 1Thu-Thuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu................. if only I had inspiration like you. To write great poems such as these with such passion, impassion, and compassion for writing for the sake of writing to express your expressions. I know how you feeeeeeeeeeeeeel. You've toooooooooooooooouched me. I wish you weeeeeeeeeell. That you may find comfort and conteeeeeeeent. The ability to write like this comes with pain- I've been there. O:-)
Only a fool would sue youuuuuuuuu... ... ... |
 Autumn Eve 2002-07-21 . chapter 1The world can be a crazy place. I have written Thu poems before, but this is the first time you have written a Sami poem. Not that this should surprise you, me being my overly sensitive self, but of course this poem made me cry. I have a new word, courtesy of Sex and the City - "Manthrax." It's pretty fiting for this, and every, occasion. Or at least, you know, every conversation we've ever had. So back to the subject at hand. This poem is amazing. It's every word in my head, it's... I don't think I've ever read anything TRUER than that in my life. It's very real. It's like everyone can relate and yet it's so personal, so you. It's like... it's like fried ice cream. It's like, how can you be fried and still cold and not melted? It's just unbelievable - but in a really delicious way. And I love your dedication. That's such a you thing to say. Which makes sense, since, you know, you wrote it and all. I love it. I love it... I love it. |
 lisa 2002-07-21 . chapter 1 I'M THE SUBJECT! yes...me and thu are lesbian lovers -cough- ahem...anyway...good good ** woman. foo shizzle. |
 sam 2002-07-21 . chapter 1 that was some really great writing..*trying to think of something to comment on* yeah..it's really really good! umm..yeah. i don't know what else to say, but the last few lines were a good ending. yup. =) |
 Curtis J. Perry 2002-07-20 . chapter 1*Gasp* Liar! You said it was about us, then love, then.. what's it about?? |
 Victory Celebration 2002-07-20 . chapter 1Very nice...very sad. I can't say that I haven't felt that way before, this poem definitely expresses the pain of many people. Beautiful in a painful way. Keep writing...until next time. |
 Madame Hooch 2002-07-20 . chapter 1whoa! What a gr8 poem. I could guess the subject, but i'm not gonna say who. i love this poem! it's true in many different aspects! xoxo- Stina! |