This was cute but I definitely wasn't hooked. The (read:)s bothered me a bit and it seemed like you were jumping around a lot which made it a bit hard to read. I'm not crazy about this first chapter but I'm sure it'll get better :)

Coffee cream eyes? Didnt u say Kaden's eyes were grey or something?

Still liking it very much...I just love Aviah's attitude..wish i could be more like her...

As for criticism (I know the story's been written ages ago and ur probably not really reading new reviews but... in case u are): Sometimes the tense change to present doesn't seem appropriate...like they seem to refer to actions rather than aviah's thoughts. Also I was wondering abt her dad talking harshly to Kaden..if he wanted the guy prince to marry his daughter that badly I would've rather expected him to show Kaden more respect...

Anyways...off to the next chapter!

Hi! That was a very funny chapter! I loved the part "take his five-hundred pound body for a little roll down the hallway" - was so funny!

So far I like Aviah and ur writing style. The only thing I didn't really like was the tense changes b/w the actions and aviah's thoughts - I read ur author's note, so I do understand ur trying something different. I just don't like it much.

Anyways...off to the 2nd chapter!

omgg. it finished! :'( AWESUMM.
o, i quoted something of yours in my 'book of quotes' of you dont mind; “You didn’t eat, you never slept unless you couldn’t take it anymore, and when you did you woke up screaming her name over and over again. You mumbled it at court functions, and read that stupid Snow White story until the pages tore. You lived, breathed and walked her when she wasn’t there – and now you’re going to say it’s too much, just because her father is an idiot?”
omgg, i luv that!!
t'was awesum xD

argh I

another awesome chapter!! hez a prince!! rofll.
umm, i'd like to read "varissa" if i knew wat it was about..??

lmfao. sweet!

bahahahaha. i like. tis pretty funni, and methinks it shall get better xD

the story was intense and very dramatic. i love it. it's very original and kind of unpredictable. great story.:D

aw thats so sweet...i love it

I have to admit, in the first couple of chapters I was tempted just to give up on this story. I thought Aviah was incredibly annoying and snotty but as the story continued and I didn't let myself give up, I realized that she wasn't one dimensional. Her bratty tendencies all came from somewhere and I learned to really like her, even though she did stupid irrational things. But this story is great and I'm in love with Kaden. The only two characters I actually ended up liking were Aviah and Kaden but just the their chemistry kept me reading. Thanks for the wonderful read!

This story was unique in a way as you wrote in another style. It's really interesting! I shall go read your other stories and see how you write them.

It's been 6 years since you wrote this story, and here i am reading it. Good stories will always continue to be read.

Whoa, nice one.