Wow. . . that's amazing. Great, powerful imagery, wonderful storyline in the poem. :)

the word use in the poem is genuinely amazing...the loneliness that the reader feels when they read this piece is a feeling that i don't wish upon anyone...great work

I love this! As I love all the poems you write. All the description was fabulous dear.

"I am aflame with anguish"

Truly beautiful, my fantastical Pandora.

Truly a star

Beautiful.

How could you ever doubt your talent when you write such amazing pieces of work as this? This is so beautiful and heartfelt. You still amaze me

...How long have you been writing, cause damn that was good.

All I can say what a beautifully worded poem. Very romantic and the imagery is completely endearing. Keep it up chica, I love you!