... Charlene Hou... Charlene Hou... what do you think about when you have time to think about these things? do you miss your friends? are you "lost" at all? you know Who you have to accompany you forever. let the Holy Spirit be your guide.

...*sigh*... i wish i never read this poem... it's so depressing... i wish i don't understand... i just wonder how many people have decoded your poem... Don't let me review stop you from writing any more of these poems... This is how you feel... This is how you are, this is your identity (or at least the part you show us).

Genuinely O:-),
Brendon (hehe i've been bored and reading fanfiction lately)

wow...this is such a fantastic poem! it's so deep, yet meaningful...

wow. that's reely good. just vague enough to convey your feelings but descriptive enough to paint a picture in the mind. i like the usage of the subscript between the analogies. amazing.

wow...that was so deep but really amazing...i dont really understand it entirely and that's prolly the point but eventually i sorta understand it..cool sister hehe

hey charlene!!! wow...this is amazing!!!! great job!!!

wow...um...uh...good poem...a bit deep for me but that's ok. I'll ask alex what it means when he gets back...
btw is it supposed to be spaced like that? and the bold and stuff?

it's really good.