Wonderful!

Extraordinary!

Smashing!

Hope you can tell that I approve! )

So very pretty. Just so gorgeous. Your writing tends to cycle between what you see and what you percieve. Swans to sparrows.

I particularly liked: "Beauty is only the pain that/Comes after pain".

All I can say is Wow! (I know, I have such a talent for knowing *just* what to say - not - but dont hold it against me, Iv had about 2 hrs. sleep).

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