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| Reviews for Last Apology |
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   Beyond The Pale 12/11/02 . chapter 1Short, yet so full of emotion. You really know how to write angrily. You need to teach me how to write |
| You Win I Will Be Your Idiot 11/2/02 . chapter 1 VERY AWESOME SONG. i can relate to this. |
| passing on pixydust outgrown 10/26/02 . chapter 1 i like this alot, funny, i always like the dark stuff. it really is great the way it comes together. yet another great piece. |
| Phoenix Flower 9/28/02 . chapter 1 I enjoyed this. You're very good at writing dramatic pieces like this. |
| Shattereddreams 8/19/02 . chapter 1 *dances* as usual, great rythm (is that spelt right?) surpassing me as usual. I love that most about your songs..they just *flow* without any effort. And you're still better than me. But you know that really *giggles* x |
| Max 8/11/02 . chapter 1 Lookie! I looked at your new song! Anywho, it's a great song, even though it is a bit dark. You're going to do something great in your life if you can just get past these stupid teen years. I guess I'll get to say I knew you when. Keep it up... |
| Kazuline 7/28/02 . chapter 1 wow that was really really good i thought the line about being dead inside was really moving...nice job! |
| spikey 7/27/02 . chapter 1 Wow... that song is frickin awesome! I can relate to that... so many of us can I'm sure. I like it a lot! Keep up the good work. Then again, you always write great stuff so I don't think bad work could be produced from you, heh. |
| laureno 7/27/02 . chapter 1 Another song! Yay! This is one that (although I know you like to write song lyrics, not poems) stands nicely alone as a poem. It's complete in it's own right, although I'd like to hear what you come up with for music for it *I don't think I could write suitable music for it*. Very nice work _ |
| Aaron Mason 7/27/02 . chapter 1 Welcome back ian! its good to see that your back. I've put some new stuff up recently and I'd like you to take a look for me. As for the song, I like ) I know a lot of people that have done this to me. its sad ( good work, keep it up |
| heather 7/26/02 . chapter 1 -cries- i'm the tenth to review? :( i didn't think you posted on ff anymore..you hadn't updated in so long, lol. i like this one a lot |
| Guest 7/26/02 . chapter 1 This is really cool. Totally poetic rhyme scheme, could even be beat poetry lol. Keep it up. Dan |
| Tyr 7/26/02 . chapter 1 Every mans thoughts after years of commitment...to be tossed down the drain... |
| Tykeria 7/26/02 . chapter 1 wow this sound familiar... nevertheess it was really good. P.S. thanx for lettn me beta read it. |
| sammy-chan 7/26/02 . chapter 1 hallo ian! more good lyrics. damn you and your ability to never write anything sucky! i |
