I can only dream of writing like you my dear.
Jenna xx

Sweet. And--colorful. The sunlight/autumn/leaves bit in the first stanza really exploded in front of my eyes with color.
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Emotion runs so deeply and strongly through the entire poem, it's peaceful and comforting just to read.
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The ending was absolutely perfect. I loved it.

your flow is very fluent
your words are very touching
this is romantic prose done right

that was so sweet, it was so adorable,could you read my poem called Scornful Conception, thanx a buch

That is a very melancholy but lovely statement on love - being unprotected as a result of being loved - but it's possibly one of the best summaries of love around.
'i want to stay hidden behind my own eyes
so that you won't know what you begin to mean
to me.' - definitely my favourite section.

I know I said I'd go away now, but I hadda say that 'poem' shoulda been 'poet' in my review of Hyousetsu, and that I have no clue really as to why I spelt favourite 'favorite'.

This time I am really off.

O_O

That was wonderful. You have such a nice style.
I don't know if you've read any of her work or not, but your work really reminds me of another fictionpress author, Sugar on the Asphalt. She's simply amazing, as are you. :)
Lovely poetry. Very good, detailed, eloquent descriptions. Fantastic.
-PN

this is beautiful. i added it to my fav stories because i experienced this before and i understand.
you are an amazin writer.
as for your review of my work...the play had no point/...well let me rephrase...it had no...no lesson i guess...no plotline. it basically was a version of life, of what people deal with, or whati have dealt with. its purpose was to serve as actions humans have taken, conversations humans have had. Its life, and life has no point. Its was something realistic to me.
keep up the work

this hits a spot...my heart's a pile of mush now....but yea, this is emotional, powerful. can't think of any c/c for something that comes this sincerely from the heart...

I really like this. Wonderfully written- very descriptive.

this poem is so unlike 'who you are' its very inspiring. i can feel your vulnerability under your tough girl image. all i can say is "wow" thumbs to you and i hope to see many more.

This is wonderful... great imagery! =)