Me again. That poem is just..awesome. I love it. Wow...
Risa xx

"or the west" or do you mean "of the weast". Is it the same girl, who you befriended, who cried because you two were paired? "Mark other deep holes" maybe say "Mark deep holes"?

You don't hate people, but you get awfully cynical when you're in certain moods. It's good and I love you, but what is with the suspicious attitude toward people? You need to spend more time with Justin apparently.

Kind of sad
I like it.
Could you maybe read and review my origl short story "This Year's Girl"?
I would really apricate it.
As I am to trying to make my own writting craft btter.
Thanks if you can and nice poem.