this story was great keep up the good work.

hey. so far i am loving this story!! I will read some more later, and leave another review then, BAI!! please update soon!!

Good story! And apparently I was wrong about Titus. It would've been nice, though, if you had let us know Zachary a little bit more- he sounds like the kind of character who is greedy and stuff but spices up a story with that personality. Good job on the story!

Aha! So his treachery still remains! This is SO GOOD!

Well, this is a little twist that you added! Keep writing!

But who was that person she saw that night? I trust him/her more than I trust Titus! Great work!

Oh, I knew Titus wasn't good! Great story so far! Very interesting. Could you try making paragraphs by the way? It's a little confusing trying to read the sections. Keep up with your story!

I like this. I ll try to read more soon. You are good at descriptions,especialy the whole water thing. Oh and thanx for reviewing!

Hiya, Laura! Like your story, so far.hmm.hehe. Romance novels are like chick flicks, though.but, I'll still read your stories.hehe. So.yea.cya.

soap opera like. Very interesting, and mature. cant wait to read the next. I think i cudve done better though:)jk however, more details and descriptions would be helpful. Keep writing and help others improve.

I loved the story Laura...it was so beautiful...i hope u write more
~Amanda~

i just love it! now i have to finish writing the sequel so i can put it up. thanks for reading viewers! XXXX

hey laura...o my goodness...i have to know who she is going to pick...i am mad a zachary...but also titus...lol...he shouldn't have lied...but u have to continue anyway
~Amanda~

Wow.Dancing is cool. What kind of dancing did they do again? I bet it was break dancing! I bet Princess Anya can really bust a move! GO ANYA! GO ANYA! ITS YOUR BIRTHDAY! ITS YOUR BIRTHDAY!

*SNIF*THIS....IS....A...GREAT....STOOOORRRRYYYY!
WAAAAAHHHHHH!AMANDA PASS THE TISSUES.*SNIF*