Interesting twist at the end. You definitely have the potential to be a writer. Ever thought of taking a course for writing?

Oh chilling! This is such an original twist to one of those classic tales, and you've done it excellently! Well done! I'm also doing a story about a doll...but I really like yours. Cool!

Wow, this was so cool. Well, at least now we see why the boy loved his dolls...took after his father. But this was so well written, and so freaky. This is going on my favs...CONGRATS dude, you're thr first on my faves list! ^^

wow, that was really freaky. keep up the good work.
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Wow...completely wicked....

Gives me the same feel as watching old thriller movies with my step-sisters. Quite different from the usual twist you find. ^^v!!

~Neko-chan

Oooh.... that was bloody creepy, and I love the twist at the end. Let me tell you, I certainly wasn't expecting that. This story reminds me of a short R.L. Stine story I used to love reading when I was younger.

Anyway, this is great. I'll have to check out more of your stuff.

Wow. That was really great. I've read other stories that had to do with evil dolls, but this one was exceptional. Keep writing!

o.o -shudder-

Hiya Patrick,
Thanks for reviewing TIER. :-)
I see many contrasting artistes about whom you choose to write about. Either

you're just taking' em for the hell of it, or your music tastes are very diverse.

Cool, eitherway. I'm doing a Britney fic as we speak, but I'm kinda having a

writer's block, so it probably ain't gonna be up for awhile.
Okay. Enough blabber from me. Here's my review:
1) "My parents disapproved of my doll collection"
>>> Dontcha just HATE stereotypes? :-P
2) "...as each one left my had and fell sadly to a doom of fire and ash"
>> Nice prose. ;-)

Wow.... my marvelously cool! Twisted ending! :-D *applaudes*

A very happy Textie

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was scary. I screamed my head off at the end(not for real though. But I did scream.)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was scary. I screamed my head off at the end(not for real though. But I did scream.)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was scary. I screamed my head off at the end(not for real though. But I did scream.)

Hey! You review one of my stories, Groupie. So, I decided to look at some of your work. Wow, you're a really talented writer. I loved this story. Great horror. Sick, twisted, creepy, and yet in the end you feel satisified. Just brillant. Anyway, I kow you didn't really care for my story. It does pick up and it's a bit of horror actually, but that happens after chapter 3 an continues through out the story.

** AWESOME STORY!!!!

You have ALOT of talent,and I must say it's to the bettering of yourself to persue a carrer in literature,especially of this sort,VERY GOOD!!!

OH MY GOD!!!!