Beautiful ^.^ I love the comparison that you make between a river an ocean and love,

Wow... Your poem left me speechless.
I really like it, but I can't tell you why... That makes me feel kinda pathetic. ^^;

Again this one's a good one. But I don't really understand the 2nd stanza. What exactly do you mean by Water loves us, because we make use of it
To celebrate the feeling of
integration?

That was beautiful.

:) kinda like chinese poetry.

very sweet---and it makes such sense! Nice work