Awwe I like this poem! Good job!

I like this one, you use a lot of metaphors yet its easy to understand after the first reading. Good job

lovely! there's a somewhat sensual feel in the first stanza and you've caught the tingly heady sensation of someone who has just fallen in love

beautiful!!

i like that. a wispy dream of a poem.

This is beautiful...What a wonderful use of imagery...*sighs*