Lorraine, i like this alot. Its the type thats open at the end, so its torture, thinking about all the possibilities. The imagery is great too, its french! What more can you say? Although sometimes I think its overdescriptive, but that is you, a romanticist. Its fits just right. Its Lorraine- ish

kai

Ooo, I liked this a lot. The description was wonderful, especially the fifth paragraph. Very, very well written! I'm so jealous :)