oh, my gosh. marlena, you leave me in awe. i am in absolute awe. this is so wonderful. it is one of my favroites of yours ever...

Lorraine

Wow! This is beautiful. It carries so much emotion. I like your style.

The narrative had me captured right until the end. See, the one problem I have with my writing is that I'm a little absent minded sometimes 0_0, so my vocabulary isn't too hot sometimes. This, on the other hand, is ravishing in detail. One of yout triumphs - and I hope to see more.

Thanks for reviewing my stuff!

This is really gorgeous. I'm glad to read something differnt

This is so depressing... running from music and the last three lines were dead depressing... wonderful work though... very descriptive! )