I think out of all of your poems, this is my favorite. I've got to say I love all of them, but this one stands out; I'm not exactly sure why.

this is really ,really cool :)I love how in all the poems of your's that i've read so far..you lure your readers into your subject!its soo awesome!
~*ScarletDreamer

Oooo!! This was excellent! When I saw you had a Hopkins poem posted in your profile I *had* to check out your poems...and I'm glad I did.

I love this. I love the simplicity, the sharpness, the mention of Berlin (my favorite city)...just everything. This is a wonderful poem.

I have to read more of your work!

aw this is a great poem. aw. like some obscure and wonderful, thing, and aw this is really good

oh oh. brilliant.


kai

I'm amazed that you can take such a short work and pack it so full of vivid description and emotion. You've just done in one page what it usually takes me at least a chapter to accomplish--wow! I can't wait to see what amazing things you post next.