I like this, it gives you something to think about. I think to help teenagers with problems like this it would be good to show that people can save themselves if they are brave and strong enough but it is good that you have got someone to help you do it (in the poem). Do you understand that? Hope so!
I also hope I understood it the way it was meant to be, although everyone has a different way of thinking about things, there's the magic of poetry!
Well Done, I'll go on to read more of your stuff :)

it's cute n realistic.. i totally understand how u feel sometimes... if that's how u feel neway....

Hey that reminds me of me, imagine that. I'm not the only one out there who feels pressured to be the best all the time!

Very good! I think I can relate to this. I really like the last two lines. Very cool. Thumbs up!

God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze

- Kacie

Wow, this really just sums up my life in a nutshell. You really did a good job capturing the emotion.