hey, just stumbled across this story and wanted to say how great it was! it keep me wanting to read and i think thats what makes a story good! thanks!

hey! just finished readying all 3 chapters! i htink the story is funny and quirky at the same time, i dont really know how it is going to unfold but im interested in finding out more!

Hey! Great story!! I'd really like to know what happens next!! so update soon!!

please update soon!! I love your story!! I hope you do not discontinue it!! cause If you do!! -

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- Well lets just say it won't be pretty! Lov ya!

I love your story! I can't belive that I didn't read it sooner!! Please PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease Do not discontiue this story! Even if you are not getting as many reveiws as you want. Please PleasePlease ple-- ok not going to start that again please update soon. :)

Wow! this story is really developing out really well! I hope you update soon!

neat story! powerful girls with strong will who don't give up and a mysterious almost gentle captor?

i like the prisoner hostage story! the captor is not going on to too much brutality even though it's a woman. thank god!
but it's really nicely written!

I like it. Its very well written and mysterious too. lol, needless to say I was attracted by the title. Would like to know more of the story behind, great potential.

This is good. Keep writing!

lady kickass--- you kick **. ;) lol! this reminds me of one of my stories, not from this site but still... please read some of mine. perhaps it won't be as good as yours but i'd still appreciate it. please continue writing this story though. :)

This is a pretty interesting story. I hope you do decide to continue with this.

~Twisted Rose