::tear:: that's really good. sad, sweet, and good. (I ran out of adjectives)

sniff that was so sweet

This is beautifully depressing. A poem in memory of someone is always heart-wrenching. This is well written.

kool...touching...if i was the crying typ, i'd cry

omg...that was beautiful...one of the best poems you've written yet. Such description, it took me back to my dad's funeral..he had brown eyes too. Anyway, you're makin me cry here! ;) Keep up the good poetry!