its beautiful...i didnt immediately understand it, but its lovely! the images..the flow of words..the words u used..ooh swan lake huh? _

Wonderful images and language... I love the idea behind this piece... my favorite line was:

In general and night allows

For the anonymity of facelessness

That is so true and how your worded it was brilliant! Another great poem!

ps - my reviews might feel a little flat today but that is because I have just worked sixteen hours out of twenty four so my mind isn't working right! Anyway, sorry for that! )