aw, I love this story - I just came across it today, even though it's been up here awhile. I loved Chris, and I'm glad she ended up with him. And I'm glad the Duke is finally with the one he loves, as well as her. anyway, nice story :)

-tawnymarie

hi, great story, i hope the sequel's up, i'm off to read it ~ Alenor

awe. cute. e. it's over. :(

but i love the ending. :D

That was a really good story. Wonderfully written. It was funny and interesting. I'm also happy she ended up with Chris. I liked him much better than the duke. Great story :D

and smexy chris wins the girl! (yay! i would have died if she had gone with the duke). i luv how u hav no grammatical errors. and what do u mean bout ben franklin not having patience?

I just took a look at your profile, and I must say that I approve of the Harry Potter :D And I completely agree with you; Harry Potter should be promoted to a status of higher acknowledgement, not merely a children's book.

Now, about your story, it's good, and has a nice plotline. I think it needs a little more fluffing out but I do understand that you wrote it just for fun. I shouldn't be judging, as my 'fun' writings are no where near as creatively scripted as this story is. I commend you. Thanks for sharing your story with us!

aw very cute if u made it longer u could have had it published too bad theres no epilouge

... how in the world is there suppose to be a sequel i REALLY DON'T want to read it if it's all about duke and grace she may seem nice but a wel i dunno...no offense

i wish u luck on your writing
A Dark Rose

ehehe nice ending :)

OMGOSH i love ur story!! its soo good, few grammar errors, good length, and is pretty deep!! I love it! u rock!

tis ab-fab.

this rocks.! a fabulous story fullstop no comma, cause ur a fabulous person! write more stoyreis! u luverly person ^-^ im going off to read the sequel! ...but i wanna more chris and nora...*sniffs*

i dun hate you...nora is SO getting chwrriissy back..u go girl!

mora *slaps her silly* ugh..make me sad, mi chest goes all constricted wen i read angusty bits :)

ouch..silly nora! *shakes her* wake up...u have a yummy god in front of you! oh i wish i were you!