|Reviews for white washed|
| aleppine 3/13/03 . chapter 1
i love the play of white crossed with the sounds you write about.
| LadyLaura020 11/3/02 . chapter 1
that is so* deep i like it!
| Dream Linguist 8/15/02 . chapter 1
I've never been in a hospital overnight except when I was born of course, and this makes me never ever want to! It must have been really hard for you to walk through the hallways in such a horrible place.
A heart for your father.
| tarnished oversoul 8/13/02 . chapter 1
i don't think i have ever been so skilled at filling my readers which such a depression. good work
| Curtis J. Perry 8/9/02 . chapter 1
ohhh.. please lengthen this! This has to be one of my favourites by you. It was described just so perfectly... 'layig prone on the sheets, pale white skin blending with the sheets, bruised and battered with tubes and wires...'. Man. Sorry, you made me go hysterical.
| sweety167 8/5/02 . chapter 1
You created an image of meaning. And convaded the emotion of the moment, making the reader feel it also. Beautiful.