So far I've only read the first two chapters and I'm hooked. I need to leave and I'm literally battling to leave the computer screen. I love your fluid writing style; your talents in writing are unparalled. I'd have to say I haven't read any story remotely as good as "Severed Wings" on FF.net, but to be honest I haven't as many stories as many of the avid readers here.

You have great vibrant characters, comedy that makes me grin like an idiot, and again, I love your writing.

I haven't left anyone a review this long before and your story is clearly worth my time to review (not saying my time is worth that much).

Shane

^__^ Yay! Another chapter! -grins- Good job on your story. It's coming along very well. Keep up the good work.

^_^ I want to thank everyone who takes an interest in this story. ^_^ I find it interesting how it automatically separates classes of people. There are those that sympathise with Silane and are all for her beating the life out of poor Collin and there are those that are the romantics (like myself) who are completely absorbed in the situation with Luka and Darien. There are a few yet that enjoy Rahool for his independence and ability to say just the wrong thing at the right time. ^_^ This story by far has been the most entertaining thing I have ever done and it only gets better. Thanks again for reading! Love Pyroangel!

LOL ROFL hehehehe Go Silane! i luv it! i cant wait 2 c wut hapens @ the end. this is really good. Keep writing!

cool story! can't wait to see what happens between luka and darien... hope katrina gets killed haha *evil laugh*

Wonderful story! I love it! Write more soon!!!!!

Lana

Next chapter! Quick!! that is an incredibal story. the caracters a unique. i found the story Highly Amusing. this was just the story i needed to read. lots of typos, but they can be ignored.
Matane

yay! you updated, i'm so happy, thought you'd forgot about this story. I love Rahool's character, hes sooo cute, aahh puppy dog :0)Please write more soon, love it :0)

This is a really good story. I like it a lot ^_^; I really like the way the characters interact and their personalities. Keep up the good work and update soon.

Post more please I loved it! I want to know why Darien's in "love" with katrina....

omg that wuz a good storie! post more plz!

hi! This story is great, i like Luka and Silane's characters, they're hilarious. Please write some more soon :0)

I was reading your story and got to this point (I HAD to review you here because I have to get offline soon) and thought a review was necessary. Review: Great story! Very intense at times (which I like!) and pretty comical at points too. I felt sucked into the story! You certainally have a knack for this, so keep it up! I'll read the rest as soon as I get back online again! :)

Wow~! Your story is like...so great! You MUST keep it up! Luka is like weird and cool. He's my fav.! Good things must happen to him!

I love your story! Very fun read. Keep up the writing!!! Silane is so cool...*goes off in fantasy world of my own*