that's an amazingly profound poem you have there- all the better to eat you with! Mwah ha ha! (Forget it- it's damn early and I'm not even vocally coherent- what am I doing reviewing?) I'm just going to reiterate how amazing it was before delving back into a sleepy eyed haze.

TO

A very deep, and thoughtful poem. It paints a very vivid picture. Great job. Peace.

I loved it... I think this is one of your better pieces... it was lovely... such a sad story... so intertwined with misery and dispair... what a broken individual you have painted with your words... great poem!