Dearest Vash-chan,

Besides some grammatical errors, this poem is a wonderfully relatable creation. With poetry I feel it is important make it relatable to everyone, no matter religion, race, etc...and interesting. This, my friend, you have accomplished. Good Job.

Jane Paul

I like it Vash-Vhan. To tell the truth some of that described me. It made me think of how some people may see me. Well thats okay, because that makes me, me.

You know, I've felt like this before so I can relate. A wonderful job here. Keep writing.

Thanks for the review, btw. I've seen the story where Schu hates Christmas so I decided to turn around, thinking that, of all Schwarz, he'd be the most excited of the holiday.

Anyway, I'm gonna close off here. Nice job. Keep writing!

~CT

Wow... Added in my fave list. You know... I can seriously relate a lot to that. I have the same problem, and I'm very different, and I can definitely agree with everything you've said here. If it wasn't for the fact that my crazy prep/wiccan/punk friend was on the fone with me then I would've taken more time to read it over slower. I really enjoyed reading it and definitely know how it feels. Well... c ya.
~*AnimePrincess*~
~*Arika Morance*~

Oh man. . .I can definitly relate to this, and very well. . .you have major talent as a poet and I hope you continue to write.

Awee Makoto! Don't worry I still

Shucks, I could *really* relate to the poem... It's sad, it's a bit depressing but I think it was intended tobe like that, huh? ^_^ This one's great too (I shall never get tired of showing other people how much I appreciate him/her ^_^)!

Write more! ^_^

Good poem. I can identify...