That was a beautiful sad ending. I loved it.

Great story.

hey! I was kinda getting bored earlier scrolling down the numerous stories i could choose to read... and finally, i read your sumary and though 'why not?' it could be good... turns out i was right... i really liked the story but even more the end... i think it's nice... peaceful and serein. i know she dies at the end, but i dont think that what was the focus... more like we were meant to see the evolution of her life... how it evolved and changed and how, despite all the uncertainties and doubts, she ended up having what she most wanted. it doesnt matter that she died, that day, she was happy(even though others suffered, it wasnt what she meant for them... she wanted to be happy... and she was...) i hope i got it right, but that how i see it... anyways, i really like it. nice character depth. you did a good job with the character relations... i find your style very realistic without being drab(like real life can be often).i didnt even notice it was you who wrote this story until i pressed the review button... i then noticed the pen name and it clicked... so, thank you for having read and reviewed my 'a change in perspective' i really appreciated it. and keep writing, youre good!

so so sad...had tears in my eyes...loved it, even though ive read it late ^_^

aw...this has such a sad ending. i'll pretend that chap 13 is the end. sad endings make me wanna bawl my eyes out.

This is really cool! I'd ask you to update but you probably aren't writing any more...

Wow! I hope that you get this review, because it seems like people reviewed a long time ago. This was such a good story. I decided to read some of your other stories, and this was the first one that I chose. Um... the ending shocked me a little. I never would have expected that, but it was definitely really good. I love the way you write, and I love your characters. Thank you so much for keeping me entertained. Anyways, this was a really good story. REALLY GOOD.

that's so sad.. =(

oo I think I hate the way you write.
*pause pause pause*
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No, this is not a flame. XD You're a great writer. Honest. I've read a few of your works. This one included.
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You have a style. I can associate your stories with you. You're unconventional.
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And yet, when I would rather be getting romantic butterflies in my stomach, I get all depressed and pseudo happy. lol.
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So, good job. You're amazing. And I'll keep reading. Why did I say I hate the way you write? Not sure. I think I was feeling depressed. *is a weirdo* And I like saying whats on my mind.
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Great work, and keep it up! OO this has to be the weirdest review I have ever given. Lol. I blame sleep deprivation.

aww thats so sad! i would have thought she would've ended up with the mak guy. But love the story, great twist, and i'm definitely going to read your other stories!

your story started off different and ended that way as well. its awesome. your story actually reflected reality. congradulations on writing it.

read the story. LOVE the ending, tragically romantic. hope to see more of your writing.

this is so sad
makes me wanna cry

HAHAHAHA. Dude, u need to get rid of this bad-** story. Please, its making me sick. Plus, im not insecure about my writing.. this story just sucks the donkey.

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I don't really like this story. Why did you kill off the main character? That was a little stupid for a romance/drama story. You should have left it as drama/angst, because I really didn't see much romance. It seemed more like a conflict story. The part with her parents didn't make any sense to me either. I also thought the rating was to high. I'm sorry if this sounds mean, but I am just giving you my honest opinion.