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| MysticSorceror 2002-09-27 ch 1,  | abuseIt's nice and jolly, a super cool poem in its own ways |
| unexpected source 2002-09-15 ch 1, | abuseokay, i like italot. its like a fan or an air conditioner fan. dont step into it. youll be chopped senselesly into bloody pieces, My love where for thou art? why run away? why taste the black flag deterent in the yellow atmostphere! what milepost numbernine! let me touch the pixies, they are so pretty. kai |
| Hurricane Siren 2002-08-31 ch 1, | abuseExcellent poem! You're right it didn't make sense, but I like the craziness of it. ~Siren~ |
| miss meaningeverythingtome 2002-08-28 ch 1, | abuseEven though it's not meant to be completely coherent, i still liked it, and understood it. :) |
| Jade6 2002-08-06 ch 1, | abuseWow... this goes everywhere! LOL! Bizarre! I liked it... I was singing a long with it nearer to the end... loved the seal in french line... I was trying to explain that concept to australians and they didn't believe me when I told them, lol... anyway I am going to go and read more. =) Jade |
| tarnished oversoul 2002-08-06 ch 1, | abusethis was absolutely crazy- no other way to put it. And of course there had to be a rail refernce- another obsession you have besides the raccoon from where springs your name. I love the queen raference though- I love queen. I like, love, adore you TO |
| Katterree Fengari 2002-08-02 ch 1, | abuse....you scare me..... nah...wait, yea...that's right...and Weird Al's songs are kewl. ...yea, this 'song' is pointless, so...you should put it in the song section....as opposed to teh poem seciton...seeing as it's an imitation of a song...yea....right... |