I love your story, it is so awesome! It's one of the first stories that have really caught my eye... in a long time. I love your characters they are so realistic, I felt like I was being drawn into the story. I only found one error in the third chapter; (quoted from your story)
(Come with me.” Ame sighed and followed her through the large house. She stopped *and a door,* and opened it. There was a set of stairs leading down. Jamie motioned, and Ame stepped down them.)
*shouldn't it be... at a door? just a little thing that bugged me :) keep wrting and I'll keep reading!
a fan

O_o Wow, I finally got down to reading this. *sigh* Jamie, you gotta update. You really do. Then again, maybe I should to. BUT STILL. *snaps fingers*
~Aphy

Hm...I don't know what to say but I did feel like I needed to review after reading a few chapters.
I don't know why but I feel that not much has happened but maybe that's just me.
Still good story though.

I feel so behind, you've written HEAPS for this story. Hehe...I guess I've been readin to much ff.net stuff.

I'll make time time to read the rest of it for sure though.

I'm reviewing. I'M REVIEWING! HAHAHA!! ARE YOU HAPPY NOW LUNAR?! ARE YOU!? HUH?! HUH?! HAHAHAHAAHAHAHA!

But being serious for a moment it was good. I loved the Rikou+Noutan fight. That was FUN! MUCH FUN!

Now back to our regularly scheduled insanity.

HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

*men in white suits drag souzou to the nut house*

One word



"Spiffy" ^^

cooL~ =) go jamie~~

^_^ *hugs Kuro* Hehe, "I failed to see the purpose of me coming here."

Anywho, SPIFFY! XD Can't wait for more.

~Aphy

*hugs Kuro*

^_^ Spiffyness! XD

~Aphy

I could have sworn she was talking with a German accent… Is Meian trying to be… funny?

HAH! ^_^ I love that. XD

~Aphy

O_O Hitan ... Meian ... kiss ... dramatic ... love ... AH! O_O THE HORROR!

~Aphy

nice...hmm...*wonders if the others can do the same*

Very cool new chapter. I loved it! Yami sounds kinda strainge but I like her. heh, as usual excelent descripions and a wonderful chapter! Keep it up!

~*~The Goddess of Night~*~

Hmm, neat ^^ Wonder who the new threat is? And the voice, THE VOICE! So many voices! AH!

Kuroi x Hikaru = KAWAII DESU!

i like it!! err...more soon possibly?