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dead-rose 2003-11-21 ch 2,	abusepleze wright more or...or..or i might EXPLODE!yes it's possible if u have the right kind of powers. of wich i don't unfortunatly. wow i went on one of my random speech things i do i thought i did thoses only when i'm talking but i guess i'm wrong of course. ok here is the cliffnotes to what i just said: good storie, u must write more under threat of hard/sharp objects coming in contact with your head, and i just had a self revelation. byebye
Neon Warning Bearer 2003-06-09 ch 2, anon.	abuseOne question: What is KIY doing in this story? I feel really sorry for Kiy, either that, or she has bo patience. O-kaay, so Aurilae's precog muse sort of thing, is a little girl? Raal awakens feelings? Is Raal by any chance, to some extent, a vampire? I feel sorry for Aiaen. I think that I like him the most so far, either him or Raal. Marisii is really silly. Daeraav and Raal should get together sometime. I pity you. Please update soon. Ja ne.
Della C 2003-03-23 ch 2,	abuseDaeraav. by all accounts, he will be my favorite character. Your dialogue between him and the officer seemed more... ALIVE than the others. That and pyrokinetics are just flat out kickass.
Della C 2003-03-23 ch 1,	abuseI'll admit, the overabundance of disclaimers in the beginning turned me off of the story at first. It's starting out REALLY good, and don't dare tell me you're too afraid of Flames that you need to put all those disclaimers up. They ruin the mood of the story. To stop my hyper-criticalness for a moment, you have a very interesting beggining, introducing the title on the very first chapter creates a wonderful little cliffhanger. I am now going to jump off said cliff and read on. fwitchaah.
jctstorage 2003-01-28 ch 2,	abuseInteresting... hm This is a Kiy AU? I think I like Kiy itself better. The characters are cool though.
Carter Tachikawa 2002-12-13 ch 1,	abuseHey! Thanks for reviewing "Figments". No, I did not know Kellan's name had been used before. I SWEAR! I guess it's coincidence, that's all. Anyway, when's this story getting updated? Keep writing.~CT
Moonwinges 2002-11-28 ch 2,	abuseDid you research the Tarot cards, or did you make it up? It's very cool. Although it is nice to learn a little about the characters, I think you're doing it too fast - we're being introduced to the characters before anything happens, so they sort of fade. Still, you've given them each their own problems, and it should be interesting how this turns out. P.S. Are they the same characters from your other stories, or just the same personalities transplanted? Just wondering . . .
Carter Tachikawa 2002-11-01 ch 2,	abuseEccentric and insane but you produce an excellent story. I love it nonetheless. I eagerly await to see what else you have in store. Keep on writing it.~CT
Ki-rae 2002-09-17 ch 2,	abuseanswer to your question: you are both eccentric and insane. But don't ever change. I'm liking this story, for some reason I cannot quite percieve my favourite character is that Aiaen guy..... has no idea why I like the fast pace of this, there's nothing worst than a slow moving story. More Please! Ki-ae
I'mnolongerhereatthisaccoun... 2002-09-15 ch 2,	abuseWell that was pretty cool.You have a nice style of things.I like it. Could you maybe read and review my origonal vampire novel?Thanks if you can and keep writing.
cze 2002-09-05 ch 2,	abuseHey! This chapter is a-okie. Really, I wanted to know a lot more about da card thingy, but getting to kno the characters are fine by me too. What is a story without the protagonists, right? Do keep it up. Yet to find whom I really like - they r all quite cool.
Toireasa 2002-09-04 ch 2,	abuseEccentric of course! Hrm hrm... who's my fave character? Let's see here... I think that would have to be.... Aiaen or Daeraav. La dee da! Isn't Aurilae like, really stupidly vapid, innocent, and ridiculously oblivious? (I remember from your site, something about senseless screaming and a cookie.) You know what, Marisii reminds me of you in a way. And I'm truly sorry for the car talk thing. My step dad listens to it, oh the horror. I want a plushie! I want one of Myschia or Laral, because they're cool. Wow... completely off subject! Yeah! I want an Aiaen plushie. ::maniacal giggling:: Hey hey! Heyheyhey! Why didn't you tell me you posted a new chapter. ::vicious growling:: I discovered you from browsing, that's it. Heyheyheyheyheyheyheyheyheyhey! Why haven't you been on AIM recently? Are you avoiding me? Bwahahahaha! You can't escape, I'll find you eventually, remember, I'm like the thing that never goes away. Right... review. Um.... kay. Damn. Yes! Very good! But I seriously hope you'll manage to keep up with the other Kiy stories. Yay ya! Okay! Bye! Update soon. Cookie! ::hugs Aiaen plushie:: ~Toireasa
Ki-rae 2002-09-02 ch 1,	abuseOMG. that last paragraph wolloped me off my seat so hard my vision went all fuzzy. This is so dark, and the tarot man is just so smarmy and I could go on forever... You must upload more of this story. I am so intriuged. The fool, tarot deck and just geneerally everything is so perfect that it all slots into place. Write more. And thank you for reviewing my story. I will write more, but you know. Lazy writer syndrome.
FlameGemini 2002-08-14 ch 1,	abuseHELLO!!!! I KNOW YOU FROM MY WRITING CLASS!!!! Remember me, "Meru"? Yes, It's me, and I insanley changed my name on Fan Fiction to Moonbaby. Pretty awesome huh? YEPERS! I g2g, but your story is cool!!!!!!!! Talk to me some time! ~* Moonbaby *~
Toireasa 2002-08-13 ch 1,	abuseOoh ooh, I like! Hrm hrm. I must say, The Fool in my deck is different, but maybe it's because my deck is just plain different. Please continue!

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