Reviews for You're My Everything

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Heather 2008-01-24 ch 37, anon.	abuseOh my gosh - I read this story like 4 or 5 years ago. And I read it a couple of times after that, too - including the sequel. Anyhoo, I decided to read it again - obviously. I forgot how much I loved it! True, at some points you can tell a teen wrote it, but the storyline and the character development and all of that is just so GOOD. I LOVE it! And I find that I STILL want a Josh for myself, lol. Onto reading the sequel now... *Heather
atreyu love 2007-07-13 ch 1,	abusesounds interesting.
siddika 2007-01-31 ch 37,	abuseGREAT JOB.
XInSaNeXBlOoDyXPrInCeSs 2007-01-28 ch 37,	abuseWow. I don't know why, but the end really doesn't leave me satisfied. It seems like everything was going well and then suddenly Jen decided that Josh isn't really the love of her life. Which he is. You can totally tell. Well, anyways, I know there's a sequel so I'm gonna go read that now! I'm sure something will happen to satisfy me... ~Hye
XInSaNeXBlOoDyXPrInCeSs 2007-01-27 ch 19,	abuseOkay, wow. I'm still reading. Despite the big test I have on the Industrial Revolution, which I have to study for, and my upcoming midterms and crap. Well. I'm liking this story. Except I think Anna's death wasn't dealt with as well as it could be. I mean, Mark wasn't nearly as sad as he could have been. But I have trouble writing about death, too. And yah. I love Josh. I once got called "Her Royal Highness" for being my spoiled little self, so I can totally relate with Jen. Heh. I'm a gonna keep reading. ~Hye
XInSaNeXBlOoDyXPrInCeSs 2007-01-27 ch 8,	abuseAll right! My first review for this story. I realize this is a five-year-old story and all, but yeah. I enjoy reviewing. I'm liking your story very much, even though the few grammar and spelling errors nag at me (I'm a grammar/spelling Nazi.) And when there's dialogue, it's a bit confusing because sometimes you can't understand who's talking. I'm sure this critique-ing isn't valid at all right now since you're probably a lot better at writing. Anyways, I'm a gonna keep reading now. Yay! ~Hye
Jaeiyola 2006-07-13 ch 16,	abuseWow. Just amazing. This chapter is so intense. I can literally say I was sobbing from beginning to end; wasted alot of tissues.Its sad to see Anna go, she seems to be a very fun character.Well, I'm off to finish the rest of the chapters! Wonderful job so far.
Gilly Bean2 2006-05-04 ch 37,	abuseI liked this story until this chapter. I mean, Jennifer just lets herself get manipulated by her mother, and forced into a marriage (which, by the way, is illegal--her mother could never force her to marry the guy) to some man that she doesn't know, for what? So her mom can have multiple cars and a big house? I mean, she caves because her mom can't get more than a small house and three cars with her trust fund? Jennifer can't have really changed that much, if she is willing to promise the rest of her life to a stranger for some green pieces of paper. My family has money, and my mom would give every last penny up for me to be happy, not the other way around. And as for arranged marriages, what the hell is up with everyone not absolutely freaking out about that? If one of my friends came to me with the problem of not knowing whether to marry a guy they love or a guy their money-hungry mother picked for them, I would smack them for even having to ask! Then I would proceed to tell them that if they did anything but marry the guy they love, they would be an absolute moron. Well...I hear there is a sequel to this, so maybe I'll read that and hope it ends better.
akaCHEEKS 2006-05-01 ch 37,	abuseOMG! AARRGGHH! I'M SO GOING TO PULL MY HAIR OUT!! OMG! YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MAD I WAS WHEN THE ENDING ENDED LIKE THAT!! WHY!!??!?!?!?! OK WELLZ JUST MAKE SURE TO MAKE A SEQUEL OR I'LL KEEP BOTHERING YOU!! AND I'M SERIOUS TOO!! omg... you should make the sequel into umm... on the last minute he accepted the scholarship at california... while jen stays with that dude for about iono... 5 years... she eventually gets money from the divorce to keep her mom happy... then she decides to go to cali for a job oppurtunity as a therapist... wellz then josh goes to her for therapy lessons but the thing is he KNOWS it's her but he just wants her to realize that she's still in love with him... so while they're having their therapy lessons she sorts of experience feelings for the new and mature josh.. but of course he has to look different now right? and she has to be ignorant about the whole baseball career... cause then it's better that way and the story will work out.. yeah... i think that's good! really good! maan!! i should write your sequel... but sadly i'm too lazy too... but yeah.. please make one! i really want one!! please oh please! thnx!! ima e-mail you just to let you know!
akaCHEEKS 2006-04-25 ch 1,	abusearight wellz ima check this story out too! haha.. i just started at this chapter just right now...
Elle 2005-12-22 ch 37, anon.	abuseI can't believe she agreed to do what her mother wanted so easily! Her mother is so materialistic, mena and self centered!! Only have one car! Jeez, it never hurt anyone to work a little!! Making her daughter give up her own happiness just so she could keep her lifestyle! Sorry just had to rant about that! Your work is really good, I'm just upset with Jen' mother!
anon 2005-11-18 ch 37, anon.	abuseYou. Are. Awesome. I just love the cliffie ending (as long as there is a sequel). This was one good story. :D
shams 2005-08-31 ch 37, anon.	abuseok, so... ive read this story a LONG time ago (and the sequel as well) and it still remains as one of my favorites. so, i do the whole "myspace" thing along with most people. and i saw this bulletin posted "He handed her 12 roses.11 real and 1 was fake.He said i'll love u until the last one dies." that sounds REALLY familliar
playgroundunited 2005-04-12 ch 37,	abuseah **...i hate to say this but...i really hate the ending. it's because you made them go through so much pain, so much trouble, and so much hurt, and yet they didn't end up together in the end. and now the ending feels as if it's just hanging. right there. it's like, the entire story was about how hard it was for them to get together, how hard it was for her to finally be able to say "i love you" to him, and they were so happy, and then they just HAD to break up, and then your story just ended like that. so yeah i know that's the original ending you'd planned for the story, so i will just say this. it ended a little too abruptly. if you could elaborate more...but i do like your style. i couldn't stop reading, so i finished it all in one sitting.
lilyofthevalley5 2005-01-26 ch 24,	abuseI don't know why but I really love this story. It is about 1am on a school night so I gotta go to bed but I amazed how captivating this tale is. Best I've read in a LONG time.

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