*blinks* this is... m lord, i think i shall be writing this on my wall. wow. i haven't words to describe this. you are certainly a talented one.

whoa! holy profound, batman. that's not sarcasm - i am in awe. you lied to me! your poems do NOT suck at ALL.

The heart’s lie begets a covetous joy

If not for more than a mere heartbeat’s time

and

And when the heart muscle begins to bleed

Convince yourself that love is all you need

are my favourite parts of this poem. you rock!

-jd

i love it, especially the part about how the heart is muscle. the heart is just a muscle, after all...