More Please!
I like!

Your story *kinda* sounds like Replica series, especially the articial clone created by scientists intending to take over the world and one of them got attatched..but other than it, it's quite good.

Hannah.

UPDATE OR ELSE!! ...teehee! ...THIS IS YOUR BEST STORY! ...well at least to me! ..yupyup! ^^-

luv da fic
update soon

it still has those distracting sign thingies.. gr... maybe its your font?? myabe its my comp... -.-'' it sounds good!! @_@

ok wait.. so there is the organization that wants to take over the world... Myra and co. and then the A dudes company that all want those silver piece thingies? @_@

Hey-lo!! This has an interesting start... Hm -.- *thinks* whats with the odd mark thingies?? they distract me.. -.-'' How did she fail the mission? She got the thingy, right? I guess she failed it cuz she got all them guards attentions... hmm.. I shall read more!! :D

need to read more! AH!(running around in chibi form and hitting random objects untill relizing there is a big sweat drop hanging off my sister's head)
Ahem... yes, what i would like to say is that yuo did a really good job with your characters. I really liked the story but I think that there is more to Tyler them meets the eye. WHAT IS IT! TELL ME! oh. Sorry. O.o

Shimagami
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This is very interesting. It reminds me of the manga DN Angel, ya know? The whole dark/Disuke thing going on there. But I like DN Angel so naturaly I like this story too. The only thing is I think you would do good to use some more detail, sometimes I get alittle lost by the randomness of it all. But randomness is good so... Keep[ up the good work.

~Shimagami~
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it was kinda a long wait..--: and i kinda forgotten..so i had to refer back...but..darn...nope i didn;t guess it correctly..

btw..it's really confusing between two..ppl...@_@

A sign of a good story is when it makes people think. And, well...just look at your comment board! Some things can speak for themselves... ^__^v

The depth in your story makes it one of the most memorable I've read on fictionpress. It keeps getting better with every chapter. Myra the human...Airis the android...this may not be intentional, but I noticed how she kept going back and forth between names, as if she weren't sure what to call herself anymore. ++technique

Definite, definite +fav. You've got my on the edge of my Nintendo director's chair. XD

Love the new chapter, can't wait for the next =^-^=

I love this story, it's so creative! and Tyler's the mystery person that prevents Myra from completing her mission successfully, isn't he?

hmm...this is getting interesting....probably what i must have guessed........

Oh alright. That does clear up things a bit about Zevia and Myra. Thanks ^o^ And you're right, there's a lot of fluffy in this chapter, heheh ^^;; Keep this going, I really wonder if the mission involved Almin who so conviently shows up at the apple orchard ^O~