This was a nice story, but to be honest, I was hoping to see the maniac guy receive a brick in the face. Yeah, I know what you're going to say. I'm taking things too seriously. I just don't like mean people.

Hey, this was an interesting story. It has a sense of the surreal to it, which appeals to me. The lines of reality and fantasy, sanity and madness are blurred to great effect.

Good work.

very cool. keep up the awesome work and thanks for the reviews. :)
-liz

Bravo, Ra'akone! I must say that I liked both main characters more than I like my own. ;) Beautifully written, beautifully told, and a magnificent plot. There was only one mistake that I was able to catch:

In the beginning, 'Ring-tail' is hyphenated. In the end, it's 'Ringtail.' But that can hardly be considered anything but trivial.

Really, it was a wonderful story. :) As always, keep up the good work!

~Iris~

This is wacky, lol! Anyway a really original idea and I can't wait to see where those two's adventures will lead them! This is going to be a really interesting series (you are going to continue it arn't you?)

Anyway, take care
Jade