sounds pessimistic. are you feeling down when you wrote this?

I hope this wasn't written as a forewarning to something Wendy! I liked it, and the colors all had great representation and explanations.

i really do like the symbolism of colours and what they stand for to you...though there is something in the prose that does throw the whole effect off...I'm not sure what it is.

TO

This is very original, I like it :)

Keep it up!

Regards,

-Jayne/x

I love this poem! It's really beautiful and wow! :) Keep writing! Nikki

This is beautiful, and thought-provoking. thanks for writing. _ I enjoyed reading it.

Nice take on the meanings behind the colours. Great work!