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| brit 2004-07-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow, this is great! I really wish you'd update soon! The start is excellent! Plz update soon! |
| Jenna 2004-03-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseAgh... The anticipation is killing me! You write so well, and I love vampire stories so much... And it just ends there... Gahh! :laughs: Hurry up write more...I need my fix! :laughs more: |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-06 ch 3,  | abuseHey :D So glad you continued with this, nice update. I really like this one, and your characters are awesome. I loved the detail, and description, and then suspense was good as well :D I really think you should continue, and I look forward to reading your next chapter :D Whispers In Silence |
| wazawaisuru 2004-02-05 ch 3, | abuseThis is really an incredible fic! Awesome job, please keep writing! |
| Zhane 2003-12-05 ch 2, | abuseaghh...!! you just stop! This is really GOOD... and CREEPY... this is fantastic... What's going on here? It kinda reminds me of the movie "Conspiracy Theory" only a wee bit scarier... Agh! HOW COULD YOU JUST STOP? ^_^ |
| Devi Lethe 2003-07-18 ch 2, | abuseI love vampire stories. This one is well disguised but the metallic smell of the liquid gave it away. Or I could be barking up the wrong tree entirely but I don't believe I am. Anyway, do continue this. I like Jeremy. It should prove interesting. |
| Amethyst Blood 2003-06-24 ch 2, | abusevery, very good. I'd love to see where this is going! It's got a great plotline, and the descriptions are just perfect. Not too much, not too little. You did a great job and i can't wait for the next chapter. -Dice |
| Lexandria 2003-06-10 ch 2, | abusehe, great story, hope you write more please ^_^ it's very interesting and, uh... *ries to think of word* thought provokeing... did I spell that right? anyway, great story and I hope to see more of it ^_^ |
| Endless Nightmares 2003-02-20 ch 1, | abuseHey- Interesting start. The use of numbers for names in pretty weird. Danielle is something to watch on. The part at the end really made this quite nasty. |
| morbidgypsy 2002-12-21 ch 1, | abuseMore please? im cuurious to see where this is going and i also enjoy the writing style. |
| Jenna 2002-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, I really like your story. Can't wait to see what else you write. :-D Glad I'm part of the story, lol. |
| MicahsCornChickLP 2002-08-07 ch 1, | abuseuh oh... what's going on? This is scary, and I hope that you keep going with this story... I'd love to know whats happening. You've got an amazing imagination, and I know that you're going to come up with something really cool for this story! |