Wow, this is great! I really wish you'd update soon! The start is excellent! Plz update soon!

Agh... The anticipation is killing me! You write so well, and I love vampire stories so much... And it just ends there... Gahh! :laughs: Hurry up write more...I need my fix! :laughs more:

Hey :D
So glad you continued with this, nice update.
I really like this one, and your characters are awesome. I loved the detail, and description, and then suspense was good as well :D
I really think you should continue, and I look forward to reading your next chapter :D
Whispers In Silence

This is really an incredible fic! Awesome job, please keep writing!

aghh...!! you just stop!
This is really GOOD... and CREEPY... this is fantastic... What's going on here? It kinda reminds me of the movie "Conspiracy Theory" only a wee bit scarier...
Agh! HOW COULD YOU JUST STOP?
^_^

I love vampire stories. This one is well disguised but the metallic smell of the liquid gave it away.

Or I could be barking up the wrong tree entirely but I don't believe I am.

Anyway, do continue this. I like Jeremy. It should prove interesting.

very, very good. I'd love to see where this is going! It's got a great plotline, and the descriptions are just perfect. Not too much, not too little. You did a great job and i can't wait for the next chapter.
-Dice

he, great story, hope you write more please ^_^
it's very interesting and, uh... *ries to think of word* thought provokeing... did I spell that right? anyway, great story and I hope to see more of it ^_^

Hey-

Interesting start. The use of numbers for names in pretty weird. Danielle is something to watch on. The part at the end really made this quite nasty.

More please? im cuurious to see where this is going and i also enjoy the writing style.

Wow, I really like your story. Can't wait to see what else you write. :-D Glad I'm part of the story, lol.

uh oh... what's going on? This is scary, and I hope that you keep going with this story... I'd love to know whats happening. You've got an amazing imagination, and I know that you're going to come up with something really cool for this story!