hayden's a magician of some sort?! he can bring dead things back to life?!

this is getting good! (well it was already good anweiss..)

wow is inbetween trying to commit suicide (his bipolar tho, not intentionally) Flip seems to be neglecting Slap...am I rite? Or is Slap just starting to re-evaluate the greater meaning of lyfe?!

♠ Spades rock! (lol)

hehehehehe is all i can say :)

brilliant!

i ♥ this chapter! so alys has become the white rabbit for the night! uh-oh. i have a feeling these "clubs" are going to have raging hard-ons by the end of thw show, lol.

But then that'd probably make them more eagar to "talk" to her.

=D

how exactly is asking for money warrant being shoved up against the wall and groped? lol

and i bet u big time the spade was lying...or then maybe not.

nice introduction to the evil dictator.

It's kinda weird seeing my name in this story so much^^ (am not telling you which character, though)--

Good to see an intake into the past!! :)

whoa, this is the furthest away from the hans christen anderson wonderland than you can get! strippers? rofl.

i have a feeling i#m gonna love this story!! :)

Great chapter!!

Love this story so far! I know you're not updating it anymore which is SO SAD but at least I still have lots more to read. :)

please dont give up this story. i've been following it for years and periodically check back to see if you've updated. its by far one of my favourites ever. i love the world you've created here and i love the characters and all the plot twists. i cant believe you dont have a hell lot more reviews than you do, because i swear, this is so much better than some of the ones ive read with thousands of reviews.
i look forward to the second version, so please put it up soon.
xx

aww, well goodluck with the story.
I can't wait till you re-write it :D

hey, just checking to see if there has been any update yet. i hope your not giving up on this because i absolutely love this story. its so imaginative and therefore so uncliche, which i love. so plz update and put up the second version soon.
me

sigh... wondering if we'll everget to see the second version of this story? I've been keeping an eye on it, from time to time... and I just realized I've been doing this for a year!

Good luck with your writing,

JDLawrence

WOW. Okay, let me say it again, I feel the need. WOW! Don’t stop! I’d be happy to be your beta reader if you are still looking for one, in fact, I’m in the process of editing a book of my own, and while it isn’t the most enjoyable task, I derive some pleasure through finding the darn mistakes and beating them to pulp…but yeah.Your story is amazing, awe-inspiring, breathtaking, brilliant, dazzling, incredible, and remarkable, (In alphabetical order, no less), and I can’t wait till you redo it to make it even better.Once again, I’m willing to help. My email is Querrynithen@gmail.com.Keep up the good writing!

I've been following your story for a while (and of all the longer works on fp, yours is one of the top three for me). I'd offer to beta, but I don't know how my time will be in the coming school year. So I'll just wish you luck instead. :)