your images are always so crisp yet pastoral at the same time

no wonder one is easily captivated

this neatly underscores the relationship between faith and reason

religion and science

and how these two can live in harmony

it's quite a feat, this.

EG

BEAUTIFUL! _ Fwai!

brilliant. genius. so livid and blunt.

this is a masterpiece,

kai

Wow. That's REALLY cool. Hey, i have some new (well actually its old, but new on the site...but whatever) stuff up and i was wondering if you couls go review it for me. Thanx and great job!

This was a really good one! I loved the imagery you used at one point about tattooing... it was brilliant... really the whole idea was interesting and unique... that is what I love about your poetry the topics are always very original. Anyway, I loved it!

Jade

Now THIS is excellent. Geezus, it kept the subject, told a story in sheer conflictual attitudes, painted a picture right before my eyes... I'm jealous. I want to write like this. I'll keep trying.

luv it