The very first of your poems that I've read that is free verse... I like this one, but I like your rhyming, steady rhythm ones better.

Short and sweet. ^_^ I liked it, but toward the end I got a little confused as to which one was the liar--the liar or the wind! XD Interesting idea, certainly; I think it'd make a great short story, actually--I'd like to write it, if you don't mind. ^^ I'm getting story inspiration from many different places lately @_@ Anyway, great job again--I hope you get to actually enter the contest again sometime. ^_^ ~MJ

This is great Terra! I really liked it. The first lines just really grabed my attention and I wasen't sorry for it, lol! The poem was wonderful and made a really powerful statement... I am glad to see you are getting a lot of inspiration (if nothing else) from the Gods and Goddesses challenges! Don't you just love how you can get a bunch of really good poems from a single experience or topic... I have gotten three good poems out of my summers work!

Jade

How the light and wind work in tandem.. very interesting. I like the personification best, though I got no example.

I liked it.

Oooh, nice. I like the feel to it. Especially the last bit in quote.

Wonderfully written! Good job! It was a good poem.

good poem