  XXXX 2009-01-26 . chapter 2 wow good story! cant wait for the next chpter! |
  Story Critic 2008-01-11 . chapter 2ha ha thats funny |
 haole-n-huli 2007-12-26 . chapter 2You promised it wouldn't take you three years to update. It's been four. Where's the next chapter? |
 BookFan06 2007-05-16 . chapter 2Wow, it's been a long time that you have lasted updated. I like your story though, I would like an update. |
 Living.My.Life.My.Way 2007-02-18 . chapter 2ok...this is different frm every other sex story ive read. o and its been almost 4 years |
| a person 2007-01-24 . chapter 2 THAT WAS GOOD WRTIE MORE NOW AND MORE SEX PLEASE |
| KRAZY 2006-10-12 . chapter 1 it has been 6 years omg |
 Lipstick730 2006-10-02 . chapter 2Keep writing you are really good! |
| joshrox 2006-09-28 . chapter 2 plz rite more! |
| jennica 2006-09-27 . chapter 2 nice.
write more please!! |
| 1:33 2006-09-24 . chapter 2 that hymen part made me crack up till i was almost crying! great job on the story.
please update soon |
 tears of emerald 2006-09-15 . chapter 2please write a third chapter! It is so funny! "oh crap, I'm sorry about your hymen! Should I call 911? What are your parent's gonna say?"
I almost laughed myself into a coma. |
 Freeeak Out 2006-09-04 . chapter 2Great work Please continue! I really need the laughs. "You dork, that was my hymen." Priceless. |
 RavenChick07 2006-09-03 . chapter 2well Ill say it sounds very familiar to alot of people's first time and this line
"I felt like a gigantic cucumber was inside of me. " really cracked me up. Well it was good and too bad you didn't write another chapter! |
| lonelyviolinplayer 2006-07-07 . chapter 2 good chap and sex the first time is a ** |
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