| Reviews for It hurts |
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Pound 6/28/03 . chapter 1what the fuck is up with your "youre absolutly amazing" scary-cult-like thing? this was insanly primative, simple... so i really hope it meant something to you cause... you didnt communicate it at all. you have potential. try? i think... it wasnt good. |
Gauy 6/12/03 . chapter 1It just plain hurts... |
Smoky Bear 5/27/03 . chapter 1it hurts that i've felt the same way. |
obsidian katana 11/27/02 . chapter 1great poem! i really like it! it's so true too! i feel the same way some times. it hurts to laugh too. nice work! keep it up! |
The Crazy Cricket 10/14/02 . chapter 1Wow. You must have been really depressed when you wrote this. I've felt the same way before...It hurts, doesn't it? |
Rose Dark Thorn 9/19/02 . chapter 1Short and very straight to the point. This is why you don't open up to ppl isn't it? I feel the exact same way about most people. More so when I was younger. I like it. I can really relate to it, and I'm sure others can as well. |
FattyButt 8/30/02 . chapter 1very true. Good job! |
Smiley- Bear 8/27/02 . chapter 1I think it doesn't hurt to give you a review and I think you brought it all together quite well! Write more! |
Daredee 8/10/02 . chapter 1what do I think? Hmm, don't go there we'll be here til tomorrow... It rulz, really...it's so, so, different yet so familar (hey, u read it on the phone to me yesterday didn't you...well that explains the de ja vu) Neways, to all who are reading her reviews and think I'm crazy...ur very perceptive and probably right... I'll shut up now *sorry for abusing your reader Sheila) IT RULZ, oh wait, I said that before didn't I? |
Della C 8/10/02 . chapter 1I think it's pretty good. I think it's REALLY good. Especially the last three lines: "It hurts to live, It hurts to die, It hurts to trust.." Vehrey nowice. |
Angel Nazi 8/10/02 . chapter 1it does hurt it all hurts! i loved this pome it's sooooo true i can't wait for your next peice of art! peace out Angel Nazi _ |
Jade6 8/10/02 . chapter 1I think the line "it hurts to trust" was really revealing... I think it was the perfect line for all the build up... wonderful work! Jade |
marba50 8/10/02 . chapter 1I love it! And I only say that to ones that i truly, truly love, so I'm telling the truth. It's like everything else you write- just the cold, hard, truth. Keep up the good work |
TK Styles 8/10/02 . chapter 1Short, simple and to the point. I like it, I'm sure many of us have helt this way before. Keep up the great work and I await your next work. Peace. |
DarknessAngel3 8/10/02 . chapter 1Wow, i love this! It's kinda like one i wrote sometime... except i used scared and yrs is much better! keep writing! :D |