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Thetis 2002-09-29 . chapter 1
i'm sorry but i can't give u a positive review on this poem but i'm not going to flame it either it. Contructive critiscm:
Try a little more imagery if possible on your part, heighten the emotion a bit, cause its clear that your feeling sad but its not clear to what extent, try bringing that out a bit more. That all i gotta say without completely bringing this down.
Bunnylicious 2002-09-21 . chapter 1
I'm sorry. Its a great poem. i had a teacher that was killed in a car accident on 1/21. he was my favorite teacher, and they had an open casket veiwing at our school, which, at least in the emotional sense, had totally fallen apart. Welll bravo again on the poem. i'm sorry it came frmo such awful circumstances.
Lady Galadriel 2002-08-14 . chapter 1
*sniffs* I love it! I miss Mr. Levay so much...
Alodia 2002-08-12 . chapter 1
good writing, although very sad. I'm sorry you had to go through this.
Lady Jedi 2002-08-11 . chapter 1
Major Props
By the way, since when did u start writing poetry? cause it was really good
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