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| liz 2006-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abusei used to want perfection. Now I'm just not so sure. |
| suicidel angel 2003-06-04 ch 1,  | abusei loved this, i really like you're writing, it's so open and honest, it's refreshing really. |
| RNL 2003-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI believe the word for this is WOW! I can't believe someone so great has actually reviewed me and not flamed me! |
| Cheyenne 2003-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI love the concept. The wording is too forward. It's like getting straight to the moral of a story without including details. But you've got a great theme. |
| Broadwaypoetess *LaBloodyRo... 2003-02-28 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. I kept thinking of Nazys (Nazis) when I read this. Damn Nazis. Also, perfection could be thought of as pop. Well, I hate pop. Er, well, it's the opposite of perfection and normal people like us authoresses. Er, nice one. *dances* |
| Sinner Heart 2003-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good I like it alot. |
| Louise G 2003-01-16 ch 1, | abuseAMEN AND HALLELUJAH! |
| CrazyMoFo1 2003-01-14 ch 1, | abuseROFL... "…perfection…IS… Not. Me. Not. You. Never. Ever. Us. " Amen... haha yeah I'm perfection. Nothing is 'perfect'. ** that **. Humans = Messed da ** up. Cocky and arrogant people ** me off 'cause we're all the same. Everyone is equal to me. We're all dirt. And you can't help who you are... we're born that way. Born ugly, crazy, stupid, gay, etc. Why does it matter? We all **' human. Anyway sorry for **... I liked the poem 'cause it has a lot of truth. ~J |
| flash-rules 2002-12-22 ch 1, | abuseOooh! I like it! The lines are brisk and leave you thinking. This poem leaves just enough something or anynother to keep you thinking about it all day! I love it! |
| breakdown in the waiting ro... 2002-10-29 ch 1, | abuseOkay, that was great. I agree...what is perfect, anyway? Nothing. BTW, thanks for reviewing some of my poems and stories :) And what you wrote in that one review that I must feel like your shrink, that's great for me, since I want to be a phsychiatrist, LOL. Practice! |
| NovaKayne 2002-10-24 ch 1, | abuseOoooh wow. I like this...I know exactly how that feels. But...who would want to be perfect? Like u say, it's so boring!! Just EMBRACE YOUR FREAKISH QUIRKS!!!! |
| Wolfychann 2002-09-23 ch 1, | abuseGood poem, ("you're you-less," I like that phrase.) I think what you're saying could be summed up: "Perfection is nothing." Or maybe "Nothing is perfect." Have you read/watched The Neverending Story? In that, Nothing is slowly swallowing up the world. And once it succeeds, everything is perfect, since all the bad things have been obliterated along with the good. But one grain of sand remains, and from it springs a new imperfect world. This poem reminded me of that story. |
| Angelic Hooligan 2002-09-15 ch 1, | abuseI'm starting to get a complex here. Good poem. one of my favorite sayings is 'one person's perfection is another person's imperfection'. So, technically perfection can never exist. So, why do people want it? Why am I asking you? Sorry, I'm weird today. |
| miss meaningeverythingtome 2002-08-28 ch 1, | abusedoes perfection even exist? i sure as hell wouldn't want to be perfect... :) good job. |
| K-Chan14 2002-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI liked it very good. And thanx for reviewing my poem too. ^_^ |