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Fire of the Vampire 2002-08-21 . chapter 1
Good, but I hope this isn't how you really feel. Suicide isn't the way out, and there is always a way to climb back up to a good point in your life. This is a good poem, but a suggestion: try writing in stanzas, or press "enter" after each line to make it easier on the readers. Otherwise, good job! :P Thumbs up!

God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze

- Kacie
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