Both versions were sad, sweet, and well-written. I understand what you must have gone through. Death is never easy. Anyway, keep it up.

~CT

Go SVZ! I like both versions.

.hang on. I'll review as soon as I can stop crying.

.You've told me about it before, but it's still REALLY sad. v_v

PRETTY! Jolie.
*french on brain* GAAH!
-SAT

oh...god...~a tear rolls down her cheek~ so sad...

*Burns oss sticks in memorium of your sibling sionce deceacsed*
a heartfelt tribute to your bro , may he find peace and not become a wandering spirit

DES~

My condolances (sp?) This is lovely, and very deep. You should write poetry more often ( or put more up)

Oh, that is so sad! It's really good, I like the style of writing.

~Super Nova~

Please, don't make me cry. Sorry

Very moving and sad.