hello

The title is good. Yet.....you should make a squel or something with chapters. Chapterless stories are still good, though. Yet short and crispy. ^^

Nice, but sad, story. Very interesting...


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

Annalise! It was interesting. It's so sad, but I think it was very well written. Rest in peace, Shari the Bird. Looking back, you can see slight indications that he would pass on at the end. But I still didn't guess. I think the ending was well-written and fit, too.

aww..that's sad. Sweet but sad. Man u really know ur geogrophy lol. all the cities u named. oh! i espically like the part when they hang their feet out the window! i soo would do that! lol hey look i finally reviewed your story! Anyways i'm glad ya got a good grade on this from that old leperchun of a teacher. I'll cya laters~

~Katie the most wonderful person in the whole universe (lol j/k)

IT WAS GOOD... I GUESS?

HeY!~AnnaLiSe~GreaT story! even tho i heard in Mr Horns class back then~poor birdy~u should have won the MONEY! my essay really really sucked~Ure such a great writer cuz Ive read other stuf uve wrote and its SUPER! LoL Keep writin more stuff LoL that story really has nothin to do wit that lecture ::yawn:: that we saw

what a great story. i want you to write more

that ** was damn depressing they get to were theyre going and tragedy man its messed up

I LOVED IT, WHOEVER WROTE IT IS AN INCREDIBLE WRITER AND SHOULD BE PUT IN A MAGAZINE OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT. MAYBE WE SHOULD NAME A SANDWICH AFTER HER. LIKE THE BLA, OR THE BACON, LETTUCE AND ANNALISE

Analysis is lying. I actually wrote this story two years ago in the same english class. How dare she steal it!!!
jk i can't lie. My pet duck Enrico wrote it. He and Annalise have a psychic connection and wrote it together. Good job you two!
RIP Shari the Bird!