good!

how did you know about the Assyrians, you not one are you?

If you are please email me back.

afro

p.s good poem

Wow. this works well as a poem, but it would probably work just as well as a short absurdist story or something - it has that certain quality to it, you know? just so oblique, obscure even, but tangible if you feel hard enough. (whups, forgot to do the poem thing, but I read it more as a story, it was that long.) _

EG

Love it. Especially the bit about dreaming of wind lashed moors. I don't know much about poetry, but I know what I like.

Oh my! This was very dramatic & exciting. I loved it! _

wow that was really weird but i loved it. i was reading it, and then i kept forgetting it wasnt a professional author or something, and when one read it one has ot not stop, just keep on gobbling up the words, the sentences, the lines and not stop or else one with lose it, and i dunno much about bible or any of that, but it touched me