| Reviews for Spare Change About The Universe |
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E. Gao 3/1/03 . chapter 1oh my. the math and art and mathandart are beautifully set against the shadow of the church, and I feel as if I could never hate math if only it turned out every time like 'one-oh-eight' and then the world would be always correct in its constant birthing. EG |
Phantom of Whispers 11/19/02 . chapter 1T.S. Eliot, I am comparing you to. You have an amazing talent, I really enjoy the oddness of your poems. **TPOW** |
Aviendha19 8/17/02 . chapter 1this is an awesome poem, youre an awesome poet! i love all of it, its so good. and, im wordless. just, thank you |
unexpected source 8/16/02 . chapter 1mathematic and stylish and soupy and the structure is extremely intersting, as always. i like it, alot alot alot kai |
Piper Cub 8/16/02 . chapter 1Wonderful poem! :) But it's also kind of sad. I too sometimes wonder why we spend precious time piddling over details when there's a whole world out there. I've also had many dreams like this, with the prosaic and the profound rubbing elbows together. |
Jade6 8/15/02 . chapter 1You used a lot of shadow imagery in this piece and I liked it... it helped add to the overall effect of your poem! Great work! Jade |
JoyGreenLeaf 8/15/02 . chapter 1Oooooo... I like it. I like it a lot. It's very... I dunno. I just like it. |