Yay! Aw. I'll be sorta sad for it to end, haha. I really liked it. I loved Garin and Kirash in the beginning but they did seem to get rather annoying in the end, haha. Still like them. But I really love Vilya, Resc and Yerin though. They're amazing. I can't wait to read the sequel and meet Kirash and Garin's children and see what's happening with the hot little threesome. Vilya is easily my favourite character. I love how he became such a prominent character and it was good to hear about his past and everything. So, I really really loved the story. It was amazing. You should try and publish. I'd buy it, haha.

Ooh! Yay! I'm ready to read the sequel, now! You rock at writing!

Aw...again, poor Vilya. That really is a gorgeous name. How did you think it up?

Aw. Vilya's an idiot. Poor elf. And poor faery, and poor human!

Sometimes I forget that Vilya and Kirash aren't girls, because they act like girls sometimes. It's not because they're with guys, but because of the way I'm used to fictions without slash.

Aw. Slash! I'm so glad to find a good author who's NOT homophobic! My sister is another one. I love your writing!


~Ivy

Oh god. What happened to "he wasn't going to push him anymore today?" God, Resc really IS an idiot. But we love him anyways...

Oh. Um. Kirash's foster father is kind of perverted. He's a creeper. This is good, by the way!

I take from the clarification that someone thought that it was f/m thats funny

Anyway the story is awesome not even two chapters in and i'm hooked.

Oh. Poor guys...both of them. Sad.

Oh, that's so awkward...I feel Garin's pain! I love this story, though.

Well. Um. That was...different. It was really good, though. Good thing I'm not a slash-hater...

Hey, just dropping a note. I really liked this story!
I'll look in to see what more you've written.

Isamara

I enjoyed this story very much. Vilya is my favorite! I'm off to read the sequel now!

This is some really good stuff. =) I think I'll continue reading. I especially love how Garin thinks that Kirash's brother is his lover! It makes the reader, or at least me, scream at the moniter "DON'T BE A FOL! Its a misunderstanding!". Anywho, kudos.

Much love always,
Cole