|Reviews for Monster Slayer|
| PapaCeef 7/24/03 . chapter 12
Yay! I liked the last chapter! Im gonna start reading MS2 real soon!
| PapaCeef 7/3/03 . chapter 5
Darn you Innaho! X ) X ()
| PapaCeef 7/3/03 . chapter 4
I'm really getting interested in this story! :)
| PapaCeef 7/3/03 . chapter 3
Poor Kyosuke! Still good though!
| PapaCeef undertakerjoe 7/1/03 . chapter 2
This is possibly the best thing i have read. :) great job! :) I like all the Characters!
| Vash the stampede45 6/30/03 . chapter 12
That awas a very good story and I think you will be a very good writer. I think that sometime in the future we will be reading copies of your stories all around the world.
| UndrtkrJoe 6/20/03 . chapter 1
Pretty good. BTW, The opening sounds like the opening from Yugioh! he he he.
| Kittae 4/15/03 . chapter 1
I really like it,Timmae. You really get the feel of an anime conveyed in this.I like the idea of the orbs a lot,too.
| Miles Montgomery 12/7/02 . chapter 1
This review is for the whole story. It was great. Sequel. MUST...HAVE...SEQUEL! Or maybe a movie.
| Purple Doom 10/28/02 . chapter 2
The reason I was angry at him was becuase I had him on my AIM list, and he would contradict almost everything I did, and didn't really know what he was talking about. Many-a-times about my country.
| Dani 10/28/02 . chapter 9
In all honesty, I haven't read this yet (for some reason, I checked the reviews first) and therefore I don't know if what Paws is saying is true. However, if it is, all they're doing is offering constructive criticism. It's a good thing, and you should take it into account. Paws is only trying to help.
| Gijinka Renamon 10/16/02 . chapter 8
Awesome! For a copy of Cardcators, this is cool!
Please do more!
| angryarguer 9/18/02 . chapter 7
Really cool, what happens next?, (I think you should make innaho have an affair with madison, either that or kill madison off! Well I dunno!
Anyway please, please continue this!
| Purple Doom 9/8/02 . chapter 1
Oh, Shut up, Paws. Are you going to write a complaint for every chapter? That's retarded.
I didn't write this series for you, so I suggest either you read all 7 chapters, and -then- review, or you just stay the hell off my account, if all you can do is reject my series, just because you're a College Major.
| Paws True 9/8/02 . chapter 2
Knowing how it has been written so far.. chances are Kyo and Tim are going to be a couple.. I won't be surprise if you put all the characters in their own little battle outfits.. like in CCS. this is like a mixture between Slayers and CCS.. Sure, the fundamentals of the powers are slightly different, but the concept is still the same... C'mon.. "I order you to surrender your power to me. Now!" is like "Return to your true form Clow Card".. but instead of getting a card..they get an orb.
You're using the Sakura/Tomoyo relationship... with having a main character and a secondary character who basically worship the main... and put them into a relationship.. And creating your own relationship using the Li like character..
You can say that the characters look nothing like the CCS characters... but they personalities are -every- similar to their.. with the exception of small out bursts like "What the hell." You've mostly.. cut classical things out of other series and try to turn it into a series of your own... Maybe I'm wrong, but this is what I'm seeing.